strawberry saliva

Generally, I thought I was a very moving piece. I may be swayed by the fact that I can almost relate to what you are talking about...but that's gotta be ...

First i read through your poem really quick because the whole (alcohol), (nicotine) thing was confusing :shock: but when i got to the end and found myself really really confused ...

Kyle was in the hot line lunch in the cafeteria when Lana pushed up behind him. “Hey!” the freshman behind Lana protested. “Hey, yourself!” Lana said back at him Kyle ...

happy birthday!!! am i late in telling you this?

Oh my goodness! i have to admit; that is the best story i have ever read in the romantic fiction category. Even my own stuff isn't that good. Wow!! i ...

This is a true story but i've changed the names and situations. Jenna was getting impatient. Lana and Kyle were taking forever. Couldn’t they just admit that they both had ...

thanks bradsk88, for the review. i'll try to do what you said.

is this really about dirt? are you supposed to be a worm or something? i'm sorry that i don't get it. but it flows pretty well. the dirt is suposed ...

Lana leaned against the school lockers as she watched Kyle talking to Madison. Although Madison was new to the school, she already had a throng of guys who were ready ...

i just love ur second line. it was pretty poetic. it is really dramatic. i like the way you held the suspense until the very end. good piece of writing.

That was nice. i also have an extremely sarcastic friend. i mean he actually speaks sarcasm as a second language. all in all i think it was a great piece.

this poem is deep although i'm not very sure what it is about. i have never been good at interpreting poetry. i had to comment on your poem because i ...

Kyle moved quickly not bothering to slow his pace for his friends who walked along a yard or two behind him. As he walked, he switched the straps of his ...

I don’t want to be with; I just want to be. Don’t try to understand that. Nobody ever has and I don’t think anyone ever will. Part of the reason ...

i love your piece. everything else has been said. taht part about loving someonelike mad, i like it. that's because i use it alot. i don't find a problem with ...